One day, Annie was talking with her dog in the house. It was very shiny day and the forest around Annie's house was very fresh and pretty.
Suddenly, squirrel and and rabbit ran into the house.
"Oh, my god! What happened? I was so surprised!"
Squirrel and rabbit were crying.
"Gov, government is gonna cut off this forest!"
"What?"
Annie and dog were so shocked. This forest was a huge home for thousands of animals. If this forest gone, animals are gonna die for sure.
"No! That can't happen!"
Annie and animals decided to meet the Queen of animals.
"Oh, Annie. Did you hear that bad news?"
"Yes, your majesty. I came here to tell my opinion to solve this conflict. "
"Oh, I appreciate. What is it?"
"First, I'm gonna send a letter to the government people. Maybe they will accept my opinion. But if they don't listen to our opinion, I'm gonna go and tell them that they should not cut off our forest. Finally, if they don't accept my opinion, I'm gonna attack the government building with animals, throwing rocks, fruits, and pouring water. And I will let animals to talk to people. They may get shock about animals talking, and decide to not to cut off the forest. "
Queen looked pretty satisfied.
"Okay. That sounds pretty good. I'll trust you. "
Next day, Annie wrote a letter, saying that the government should not be cutting off the forest. And sent it to the government. And government's letter came. The letter was very long and boring, but it was mainly about the opinion that they can't, and they don't want to stop.
After she rip off the letter from the government, she went to the government building. And she shouted.
"Cutting off the forest, which is a home for animals, just because of development, is totally ridiculous!"
Many people agreed and payed attention. However, the government didn't listen to it.
So finally, she and animals prepared for the attack to the government. They collected rocks, fruit, and plenty of water to attack the government building.
One week later, Annie and thousands of animals ran to the government building. And started to throw rocks to the cars of the government people, poured water on the windows, and threw the fruits to the stairs and gates.
Squirrel and rabbit were crying.
"Gov, government is gonna cut off this forest!"
"What?"
Annie and dog were so shocked. This forest was a huge home for thousands of animals. If this forest gone, animals are gonna die for sure.
"No! That can't happen!"
Annie and animals decided to meet the Queen of animals.
"Oh, Annie. Did you hear that bad news?"
"Yes, your majesty. I came here to tell my opinion to solve this conflict. "
"Oh, I appreciate. What is it?"
"First, I'm gonna send a letter to the government people. Maybe they will accept my opinion. But if they don't listen to our opinion, I'm gonna go and tell them that they should not cut off our forest. Finally, if they don't accept my opinion, I'm gonna attack the government building with animals, throwing rocks, fruits, and pouring water. And I will let animals to talk to people. They may get shock about animals talking, and decide to not to cut off the forest. "
Queen looked pretty satisfied.
"Okay. That sounds pretty good. I'll trust you. "
Next day, Annie wrote a letter, saying that the government should not be cutting off the forest. And sent it to the government. And government's letter came. The letter was very long and boring, but it was mainly about the opinion that they can't, and they don't want to stop.
After she rip off the letter from the government, she went to the government building. And she shouted.
"Cutting off the forest, which is a home for animals, just because of development, is totally ridiculous!"
Many people agreed and payed attention. However, the government didn't listen to it.
So finally, she and animals prepared for the attack to the government. They collected rocks, fruit, and plenty of water to attack the government building.
One week later, Annie and thousands of animals ran to the government building. And started to throw rocks to the cars of the government people, poured water on the windows, and threw the fruits to the stairs and gates.
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A brilliant story describing the conflict between the conservationist (Annie and animals, those who want to save the forest) and the industrialist (mayor and citizens, those who want to develop the city) Your story effectively showed the aftermath of the war between animals and people. I especially liked the 3rd ending. Still, you could have improved your story if you had explained more about Annie. Is Annie a girl, an animal, or something else?
ReplyDeleteThank you for praise. And Annie in the story was a girl that can speak with animals.
ReplyDeleteThis is a really nice story, Minji, I really like the different kinds of endings and the idea of the story is very interestng and I liked the conflict of conservationists and industrialists too. :) ^^
ReplyDeleteIt really fun story! And it is interest story!
ReplyDeleteWow, it's an amazing story!! I really enjoyed reading your story about Annie the girl who could speak with animals!!
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