Hello everybody. Today, I am gonna introduce my diamente poem. There are two kinds of poems. First is antonym and the second one is synonym. Please read carefully.
Antonym
WATER
CLEAR, COOL
SAVING, DRINK, CLEAN
BLUE, CRYSTAL, DROP, ICE
KILLING, BURN, SCARE
HOT, SCARY
FIRE
Synonym
Jelly bean
delicious, various
eat, choose, having fun
chocolate, popcorn, lemon, cherry
teasing, guessing, trying
yucky, unfortunate
fun
I think this is a good diamante poem
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ReplyDeleteYour diamante poems are well written. However, you need to work on both poems. In case of antonym poem, try to use different word instead of "clean", such as cleansing or clarifying. (the word "clean" can be misunderstood as an adjective, not as a verb). Also, you can improve your poems even more by selecting a better word for "scare" since you have already included the word "Scary" in the 6th stanza. In case of synonym poem, try to find different verbs for "Having Fun" since you included "Fun" as the second word for your poem, such as enjoy. Anyway, keep up the good work :)
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